♥ ([info]airelyn) wrote,
@ 2005-08-27 20:29:00
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Current music:w-inds. - Izayoi no Tsuki <3333

am spamming :D ;
Decided to make another entry for it :x Am spamming >3

I wrote this random story and yeah it's entitled ageha. HAH. And those reading, I need suggestions, should I make another version of the story, longer and clearer. Cause this short one has tons of mysteries left D: but am afraid a clearer version would spoil the whole thing D:

WARNING : by agreeing to read this, you shan't blame me for any puking caused by the story D:

Oh and I don't know how I managed to come up with that guy humming away in the dark (with only his silhouette seen) because it's actually in Izayoi no Tsuki lyrics, I swear I didn't know O___o


ageha

That butterfly that once rested on your shoulder will return again someday...

The curtains danced to the melody of the wind as the moonlight penetrated through the windows. A swallowtail butterfly landed on the window sill, its delicate yellow wings tinged with strays of black. The intricate patterns glistened in the light as the silvery-blue moon shone its mystifying light on them. Its wings stopped abruptly as the butterfly lied down to rest.

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Memories are just like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, put together piece by piece to form a beautiful scene that she longed for once again.

The puzzle lay on the maroon carpet, radiating an invisible glow. She could feel a tinge of warmness as her thin, dainty fingers caressed it fleetingly.

Nothing has changed since that incident, the picturesque scene of the beach outside the window was the same, yet nothing was the same anymore. The footprints that were once left on the beach had been washed away by the monotonous waves.

There was a sense of melancholy in the wind as the night laid a blanket of loneliness on the beach and the moon shone alone in the dark night sky.

She felt the wind flirting with her hair, stirring them quietly with its gentle touch. Her face slowly lifted when she thought she heard a familiar sound nearby.

Cupping her palms behind her ears, she slowly closed her sparkling eyes and listened searchingly for that melodious sound.

She felt her heart skip and pearly tears started rolling down across her flawless cheeks. It was not her imagination, she heard it now, distinct and clear.

The wind carried the humming of a song she knew too well. The song that had been echoing in her head since that incident had happened. As the silvery melody flowed through her, she could feel the warmth of the tears that were flowing like an endless river down her cheeks.

She could see it now, the silhouette of a lone figure standing under the blue moon, his shadow his only faithful companion. He was facing the dark sea, his hands in his pockets, insulated from the lonely coldness of the night.

The song he was humming was filled with overflowing loneliness yet it was beautiful. She felt an indescribable feeling flowing within her as she focused on the melodious tune.

Her hands were clasped in a prayer as she continued gazing at the spot where the lone figure had stood.

He was not there anymore, engulfed into the endless darkness.

---

The butterfly on the window sill lifted its beautiful wings and took off, disappearing into the night sky, taking with it the soft humming of the song.




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[info]cherrylilwolf
2005-08-27 01:00 pm UTC (link)
I like it XD It's sad ;___; *has limited vocab*

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[info]summerloveremix
2005-08-27 02:34 pm UTC (link)
;_;

I think it's perfect just the way it is. You could make a longer version but I love the vagueness of this one. It's written is a way where the mystery helps the overall setting and mood. I loved it <33

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[info]airelyn
2005-08-27 02:41 pm UTC (link)
I was thinking that too ._. I guess if I ever do write a longer one am not letting anyone read it XD

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[info]x_amadare
2005-08-28 05:28 am UTC (link)
It is beautiful and bittersweet! That I cannot describe with my horrible usage of words! ;____;

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[info]twee91
2005-11-01 11:42 am UTC (link)
hey..you don't know who i am but anyway, your story is nice this way. it let's the reader's imagination flow. so that it's like up to the reader to decide what happened to the girl and stuff. =D your vocabulary is also really good. haha. your style of writing is also nice. the way you describe things is nice. not like for the line: "as the night laid a blanket of loneliness on the beach", most people will probably put something like "the beach was lonely" and blah blah blah. anyway, if you don't mind me pointing out an error (sorry..i think i'm like a critic.. gomen nasai..), it's just a small gramatical error..your this line: "The puzzle lied on the maroon carpet"..the 'lied' should actually be 'lay'. k? sorry if you don't like people pointing out this kind of stuff..just say and i wil never do it again..*worried*

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[info]twee91
2005-11-01 11:47 am UTC (link)
oh and eh..by the way..is your display pic shim chang min from dbsg? =P

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[info]airelyn
2005-12-09 03:21 am UTC (link)
thanks for pointing it out :D

And yes it was Shin Changmin. XD

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